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sometimes i used to think of what it would be like
to be held by you
or touched
by you
the day was getting tired and i was too
my fingers were stiff and turning purple
yours were warm and pink and i thought
itd be nice to warm up
with our hands intertwined
passive romantic gestures
wherein petty jealousy doesn't interfere
we could link together
i remember lying in quiet cold with you
how soft you were
how we all breathed together
it was soothing and perfect
i think i could've done more
made something but then
couldn't we all
make something out of assumed nothing
be creators of love
to be held by you
or touched
by you
the day was getting tired and i was too
my fingers were stiff and turning purple
yours were warm and pink and i thought
itd be nice to warm up
with our hands intertwined
passive romantic gestures
wherein petty jealousy doesn't interfere
we could link together
i remember lying in quiet cold with you
how soft you were
how we all breathed together
it was soothing and perfect
i think i could've done more
made something but then
couldn't we all
make something out of assumed nothing
be creators of love
sometimes i like to pretend im not a little shit
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